2004-05-11 [eyes of frost]: I am Rachel the creator of this wiki page. I welcome those who would read my story. It will be updated constantly so read it while you can. Constructive criticism is very welcome. I am sorry about how long the story is right now. Once I figure out how to make it shorter and still have the entire story, I will be sure to do it. If anyone does not like the rules of no swearing or putting other's down on this page please do not let the door hit you on your way out. Please have a wonderful night or day. ^_^!

2004-05-12 [eyes of frost]: cries...no one is visiting...cries some more...oh well...this cry baby will get over it. ^_^!

2004-05-12 [Spork]: ello ello!

2004-05-12 [eyes of frost]: hello

2004-05-12 [eyes of frost]: i cant be on for much longer. Its midnight here. i have to get to bed soon. if you would like you can read my story...or we could talk about something. i dont know what. maybe you could think of something?

2004-05-12 [mywolfalways]: Well, it's a long story so it will take a bit for people to read it all. I do have it on my palm and I will be reading it. I have another one on my queue before yours though. (--I do a lot of reading for people--)

2004-05-13 [mywolfalways]: Chapter one was interesting, but very hard to follow. The introduction was cute, but I think I would have liked to hear about the antics of you and Schi-Schi staying after school. I felt that the first chapter could have done with more detail. Overall, though, it was a good start. It definately captures the attention of the reader.